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Underneath This Burning Sun (Free verse) by forsaken
I got to get something of my chest
I'm a soldier and I just want to be the best
Right now I can't let anyone get in my way
From getting to be that one day
I got feelings for this girl who I terribly miss
I'd seriously give your life for her kiss
Even if I thought it could work right now
I'd have to say sorry but we'd slow eachother down
Two lives heading in different directions
I can only hope we share some intersections
Just to see you a visit every now and again
I hate the idea of it we got to seattle being friends
I'll keep my word to you as I'll never forget
No matter how long it's been how much it's ment
To me to know and shared my time with you
Not the distance or anything else I could do
Could change the fact that you're the first thing I
Think of when I wake up in the morning that goodbye
Should've took my heart with it has you're the only one
I want to be with underneath this burning sun
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.9640274
Overall Rank: 130
Posted: July 9, 2007 11:28 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2007 11:28 AM PDT
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