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The One I Threw Back (Free verse) by drnick
I observed it from afar,
Inspected its every flaw,
Drew conclusions,
Issued a final statement.
As I turned to close the book,
I paused to heed a feeling,
Which took ahold,
Disabled, I could not let go.
So I made my study closer,
Admired her every flaw,
Erased my old conclusions,
Developed a dream.
Constantly moving closer,
Taking note she noted me,
She danced inside my mind,
And whispered something.
The perfect truth had me,
I sat there as if shot,
"The way strawberry strands
cascade to her lips," I jot.
Sitting there before me,
With her paralyzing stare,
I pulled her tight against me,
And laced my fingers in her hair.
I shook with electric fever,
A dream realized and embraced,
Inside this perfect moment,
I found God inside her face.
Shoving her back I turned,
Ran with mournful fury,
I looked back to catch a glimpse,
The dream had become blurry.
I've buried myself inside my mistakes,
Made myself a home,
Here I'll hide forevermore,
Secure but alone.
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Posted: June 18, 2007 10:40 PM PDT; Last modified: June 18, 2007 10:40 PM PDT
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I love the torment hindsight can deliver.