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Decisions (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Decisions decisions Where goes the incision? To cut the eye Would spoil the vision Near the ear Won't do, I fear, For when you wake You'll mean to hear Split the head Or tongue instead? Lose your speech Or wake up dead? Oh, cadaver, be still You're such a pill I'm mainly sane Say what you will Decisions decisons Here goes the incision Aren't you impressed By my flawless precision?

Up the ladder: The Day Before Christmas
Down the ladder: natural

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7171
Posted: June 13, 2007 12:51 PM PDT; Last modified: June 13, 2007 12:51 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] lmp @ 141.154.134.3 | 14-Jun-07/10:53 AM | Reply
gross, as in anatomy.

clever.
[8] Skamper @ 202.6.130.10 | 16-Jun-07/10:43 AM | Reply
flows along nicely enough to be kinda fun and yet a little bloody.
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