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Decisions (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Decisions decisions Where goes the incision? To cut the eye Would spoil the vision Near the ear Won't do, I fear, For when you wake You'll mean to hear Split the head Or tongue instead? Lose your speech Or wake up dead? Oh, cadaver, be still You're such a pill I'm mainly sane Say what you will Decisions decisons Here goes the incision Aren't you impressed By my flawless precision?

Skamper 16-Jun-07/10:43 AM
flows along nicely enough to be kinda fun and yet a little bloody.




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