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Temptation (Free verse) by nicole081083
I feel like I'm on fire Not wanting to escape Your kiss is my desire Every moment I'm awake One touch ignites a flame Which leaves a burning sensation And I can not contain This lustful temptation

Up the ladder: People of Discord
Down the ladder: Love(a fabled creature)

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10265
Posted: June 10, 2007 5:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2007 5:53 PM PDT
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[7] richa @ 85.210.32.212 | 16-Jun-07/2:30 PM | Reply
lustful temptation? burning sensation? is this about VD.
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