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popes body (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
when i looked acroos the hall
i had to stand real tall
people pushing and shoving
waiting for there turn to see,
a man turning yellow in the casket,
i turned and threw up in a basket.
he loved the world..but did he love me?
i wanted to talk to him, i wanted him to see,
i turned and left, i sat down and cried
i listend to the crowd i listened to the world
i thought about what he did for his country..
he did more than me.....
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Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10281
Posted: April 22, 2005 9:05 PM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2005 9:05 PM PDT
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