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popes body (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
when i looked acroos the hall i had to stand real tall people pushing and shoving waiting for there turn to see, a man turning yellow in the casket, i turned and threw up in a basket. he loved the world..but did he love me? i wanted to talk to him, i wanted him to see, i turned and left, i sat down and cried i listend to the crowd i listened to the world i thought about what he did for his country.. he did more than me.....

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10281
Posted: April 22, 2005 9:05 PM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2005 9:05 PM PDT
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