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A Future (Free verse) by forsaken
I sit here tonighht
Tring to end a fight
It's going on within
I feel it beneath my skin
Is there a demon inside of me
Something won't let me be
All on my mind is you
Tell me what to do
My heart has no pertection
Could it be an infection
Love it's got me weak
I can barely speak
Don't worry all I need
Is you as my desires you feed
I long to see your face
Bring me to a heavenly place
Let me see your smile
Stop it before it piles
Don't need the weight
Carring that burden ain't my fate
It's to love you till I die
To be there if you need to cry
I promise with all my heart
To protect yours from falling apart
So let me be the one
Who brightings your day like the sun
As you do this for me
A future without you I hope I never have to see
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.88
Weighted score: 6.8674173
Overall Rank: 283
Posted: May 19, 2007 8:28 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2007 8:28 PM PDT
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