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A Future

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 May 2007 · 1 comment

I sit here tonighht Tring to end a fight It's going on within I feel it beneath my skin Is there a demon inside of me Something won't let me be All on my mind is you Tell me what to do My heart has no pertection Could it be an infection Love it's got me weak I can barely speak Don't worry all I need Is you as my desires you feed I long to see your face Bring me to a heavenly place Let me see your smile Stop it before it piles Don't need the weight Carring that burden ain't my fate It's to love you till I die To be there if you need to cry I promise with all my heart To protect yours from falling apart So let me be the one Who brightings your day like the sun As you do this for me A future without you I hope I never have to see

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[5] Dovina 21-May-07/12:53 PM Reply
Check the spelling and get rid of the duplications.