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Always there (Free verse) by holliebollie_19
I don’t think things are working out and the ride is starting calmly now but every roller coaster has its turns and after every turn comes its ups and downs and when its over it starts all over again so put your hands up and ride with me don’t let your fears take you off you know its ok to cry all the while and when we’re falling down scream and shout but make the most of it all the way down and when its over ill still hold your hand but if we don’t make it ill still be here and this wonderful view might only last a bit but when im here with you it’s a second of the best and when its over it starts all over again so put your hands up and ride with me and when its over ill still hold your hand but if we don’t make it we’ll start again

Up the ladder: Born and Fed
Down the ladder: Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7286
Posted: April 17, 2007 3:57 PM PDT; Last modified: April 17, 2007 3:57 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] holliebollie_19 @ 76.181.20.240 | 17-Apr-07/3:57 PM | Reply
It is sort of like a song.
[n/a] holliebollie_19 @ 76.181.20.240 | 17-Apr-07/3:57 PM | Reply
It is sort of like a song.
[n/a] holliebollie_19 @ 76.181.20.240 | 17-Apr-07/3:57 PM | Reply
It is sort of like a song.
[n/a] holliebollie_19 @ 76.181.20.240 | 17-Apr-07/3:57 PM | Reply
It is sort of like a song.
[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 19-Apr-07/8:55 AM | Reply
Hollie Bollie, this is indeed sort of like a song. It is sort of like a song before it is sung.
[7] half.italian @ 76.172.249.205 | 19-Apr-07/7:11 PM | Reply
Kinda nice.
[4] Sasha @ 128.135.197.101 | 22-Apr-07/5:35 AM | Reply
cliché
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