poemranker ::Stolen Moments by mango123

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Stolen Moments

Member since 2007 · Posted 14 Mar 2007 · 1 comment

Eyes Burning Hearts Beating Traffic moving People Passing Leaves Swirling At our feet Waiting for the train Time Flying Trains Passing One,Two,Three Finally we board Madly writing Laughing like children at play Jealous eyes watching Wishing to have the same Hearts racing Wheels racing Hateing the speed We stop You leave Heart breaking Soul aching As I watch you go I wait for you to turn One last look Our eyes meet I ache to be with you Then your gone To few and far between

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[8] maggiem11001 16-Mar-07/10:02 PM Reply
wow you really did a good job on this. i like it a lot