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Stolen Moments (Free verse) by mango123
Eyes Burning Hearts Beating Traffic moving People Passing Leaves Swirling At our feet Waiting for the train Time Flying Trains Passing One,Two,Three Finally we board Madly writing Laughing like children at play Jealous eyes watching Wishing to have the same Hearts racing Wheels racing Hateing the speed We stop You leave Heart breaking Soul aching As I watch you go I wait for you to turn One last look Our eyes meet I ache to be with you Then your gone To few and far between

Up the ladder: Solitary Being
Down the ladder: Sun (Pantoum)

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8835
Posted: March 14, 2007 8:18 PM PDT; Last modified: March 14, 2007 8:18 PM PDT
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[8] maggiem11001 @ 70.226.87.75 | 16-Mar-07/10:02 PM | Reply
wow you really did a good job on this. i like it a lot
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