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Stolen Moments (Free verse) by mango123
Eyes Burning
Hearts Beating
Traffic moving
People Passing
Leaves Swirling
At our feet
Waiting for the train
Time Flying
Trains Passing
One,Two,Three
Finally we board
Madly writing
Laughing like children at play
Jealous eyes watching
Wishing to have the same
Hearts racing
Wheels racing
Hateing the speed
We stop
You leave
Heart breaking
Soul aching
As I watch you go
I wait for you to turn
One last look
Our eyes meet
I ache to be with you
Then your gone
To few and far between
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8835
Posted: March 14, 2007 8:18 PM PDT; Last modified: March 14, 2007 8:18 PM PDT
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