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Menopause (Free verse) by Stephen Robins
Flaps, Lapse.

Up the ladder: I Should Have Jumped
Down the ladder: For the First Time

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10953
Posted: January 29, 2007 1:08 AM PST; Last modified: January 29, 2007 1:08 AM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 30-Jan-07/7:16 AM | Reply
Do you really need the comma?
[n/a] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 > Ranger | 30-Jan-07/7:51 AM | Reply
Oh, it's the pause. Gotcha.
[2] xxx @ 67.172.190.253 > Ranger | 30-Jan-07/7:51 AM | Reply
Without the comma,
It does not work,
The genius is in the generosity of that comma!
[n/a] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 > xxx | 30-Jan-07/7:52 AM | Reply
I just worked that one out, right this second ;-)
[n/a] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 > Ranger | 31-Jan-07/5:28 AM | Reply
Are you flirting with rockmage?
[n/a] ecargo @ 167.219.88.140 | 30-Jan-07/7:41 AM | Reply
Pleas.
ap[p]les, alps
flop, slap.
eap.
[n/a] Stephen Robins @ 89.240.35.100 > ecargo | 30-Jan-07/9:06 AM | Reply
Thanks.
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