poemranker ::Wretch by MacFrantic

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Free verse № 148179

Wretch

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Nov 2006 · 2 comments

The letter I dread is the word of the dead Poisonous echoes will ring through my head A fool digs the earth with a spade of wood His hands are soiled but his heart is good O my Lord what is this poor soul forsaken? He dwells in the earth his spade has taken

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[9] Dovina 28-Nov-06/8:47 PM Reply
Pretty neat, making all the lines of the same number of characters. And it has a good point to boot. Nice.
[1] Stephen Robins 1-Dec-06/3:41 PM Reply
Yopu either need to masturbate into a woman or get trapped in one, either way this is utter village .