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Lyric № 147937

I always Win

Member since 2006 · Posted 3 Nov 2006 · 3 comments

iM TELLING THE TRUTH i HAVENT LIED dONT DARE PROVE ME WRONG i AM FULL OF PRIDE yOU HAVE WHAT I DESIRE bUT IM NOT JELOUS i AM TOTALLY CONTENT iN KNOWING I AM SELFISH i AM INVINCIBLE i FEEL NO PAIN tHATS RIGHT IM A BIG DEAL fOR MY NAME IS VAIN i DONT WANT ALL THAT iTS WAY TO BIG wHO AM I KIDDING? iVE BEEN KNOWN TO BE A PIG tHAT FEELS SO GOOD i CRAVE MORE ITS A MUST dO I CARE IF ITS WRONG? i WILL LATER BUT IM IN LUST mY LOVE TURNS TO WRATH mY VISION IS BLURRY i AM READY TO SEAK MY REVENGE sO I OPT FOR FURY dONT GET IN MY WAY oR ILL MAKE YOU BLEED tHAT IS MINE mY NAME IS GREED iLL GO TO WORK wEARING SOILED CLOTH i AM KNOWN FOR BEING LAZY mY NAME IS SLOTH i AM DEADLY aND I ALWAYS WIN i AM IN EVERY THOUGHT & ACTION i AM THE YOU, fULL OF SIN

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[3] Dovina 11-Nov-06/12:50 PM Reply
Do you think switching upper and lower case is cute? It's not. This needs more thought about what it says.
[n/a] InWonderLand › Dovina 11-Nov-06/3:14 PM Reply
Dont have a stick up ur ass about it!
[3] Dovina › InWonderLand 11-Nov-06/4:31 PM Reply
It's what a wasp does, isn't it? A waspish-looking poem, too, a kind of in-your-face reversal. It's what is. Butt "is" is such a bland word. It's what bees - much better.