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I always Win (Lyric) by InWonderLand
iM TELLING THE TRUTH i HAVENT LIED dONT DARE PROVE ME WRONG i AM FULL OF PRIDE yOU HAVE WHAT I DESIRE bUT IM NOT JELOUS i AM TOTALLY CONTENT iN KNOWING I AM SELFISH i AM INVINCIBLE i FEEL NO PAIN tHATS RIGHT IM A BIG DEAL fOR MY NAME IS VAIN i DONT WANT ALL THAT iTS WAY TO BIG wHO AM I KIDDING? iVE BEEN KNOWN TO BE A PIG tHAT FEELS SO GOOD i CRAVE MORE ITS A MUST dO I CARE IF ITS WRONG? i WILL LATER BUT IM IN LUST mY LOVE TURNS TO WRATH mY VISION IS BLURRY i AM READY TO SEAK MY REVENGE sO I OPT FOR FURY dONT GET IN MY WAY oR ILL MAKE YOU BLEED tHAT IS MINE mY NAME IS GREED iLL GO TO WORK wEARING SOILED CLOTH i AM KNOWN FOR BEING LAZY mY NAME IS SLOTH i AM DEADLY aND I ALWAYS WIN i AM IN EVERY THOUGHT & ACTION i AM THE YOU, fULL OF SIN

Down the ladder: Never Said Thank You

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.523188
Overall Rank: 12762
Posted: November 3, 2006 8:21 PM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2006 8:21 PM PST
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Comments:
[3] Dovina @ 72.234.150.12 | 11-Nov-06/12:50 PM | Reply
Do you think switching upper and lower case is cute? It's not. This needs more thought about what it says.
[n/a] InWonderLand @ 71.92.211.90 > Dovina | 11-Nov-06/3:14 PM | Reply
Dont have a stick up ur ass about it!
[3] Dovina @ 72.234.150.12 > InWonderLand | 11-Nov-06/4:31 PM | Reply
It's what a wasp does, isn't it? A waspish-looking poem, too, a kind of in-your-face reversal. It's what is. Butt "is" is such a bland word. It's what bees - much better.
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