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Wry Edward's wry smile (Limerick) by oddgreenout Ed, bled dead his pleasure, pure, pint of Guinness
Fed full, from his wry smile we did witness
His hand hairy home, a hawlk
His H-arm around, he did talk
Ed's wry smile, hairy hand young man. innocence
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Posted: October 14, 2006 5:33 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2006 5:33 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7811 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.37.27
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15-Oct-06/2:05 PM
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Limericks usually march along with sing-song rhythm in addition to the rhyming scheme. What is a hawlk? A few too many commas, it seems, and a meaning covered in unusual language.
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