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Wry Edward's wry smile (Limerick) by oddgreenout

Ed, bled dead his pleasure, pure, pint of Guinness Fed full, from his wry smile we did witness His hand hairy home, a hawlk His H-arm around, he did talk Ed's wry smile, hairy hand young man. innocence

Dovina 15-Oct-06/2:05 PM
Limericks usually march along with sing-song rhythm in addition to the rhyming scheme. What is a hawlk? A few too many commas, it seems, and a meaning covered in unusual language.




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