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Its Hard to Say (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 Its hard to say, but i know
about the twinkle in your eye.
A glimse of me caught your face
"Oh!How pretty", i just cant lie.
Its hard to say, but i know
about the desire to be a friend.
Its about time to tell you how i feel
but before i do a DATE i recomend?
Its hard to say but i know
about the poem im writing to you.
I hope you like it, its kinda short
after this poem, hopefully everything will fall through
Up the ladder:
3AM At Whitey's
Down the ladder:
My Christmas Gift
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Posted: September 19, 2006 5:57 PM PDT; Last modified: September 19, 2006 5:57 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10243 Comments:
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colbaby @ 220.233.180.7
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20-Sep-06/5:33 AM
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It sounds like you have a crush on someone then you say "after this poem, hopefully everything will fall through" which to me means you're not into this burgoning relationship afterall. Is my head destined to be done in daily?
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Ranger @ 86.142.242.175
> colbaby
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21-Sep-06/10:55 AM
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Yes, but give it a few days and you'll have developed an amazing ability to predict which poems to read properly, and which to just skim through. Trust me on this.
"Ohhhhh, if you want possession, it's just 'ITS', but is you want a conjunction, it's 'IT apostrophy S' ... scalawag."
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