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turn back time (Free verse) by pollywolly
skipping through the sand made road scuffed toes skipping through the puddles formed there running faster to get where?

Down the ladder: Her Eyes

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9749
Posted: July 22, 2006 1:31 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2006 1:31 PM PDT
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[6] ecargo @ 167.219.88.140 | 25-Jul-06/10:06 AM | Reply
I like the idea, but it needs more. Such a spare poem, too, can't really support repetition of words unless it serves a purpose (i.e., "skipping"). Expand this--bring us along with you.
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