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The First One (Free verse) by Aurthur Unknowen
To whom controls my dismay
please release me from this neck tight hold
in this I am a mortal my energy frazzled inside my head I m dazzled
by the forces you hold
please let me explain for I feel Iam sane
I have a soul familier with pain
I believe my limit has been met
I leel this is enough and that you must lighten up
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9738
Posted: March 26, 2005 9:12 PM PST; Last modified: March 26, 2005 9:12 PM PST
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