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Jackdaw (Free verse) by Zoe
False are the ways of a woman, in words and deeds alike, and although
she may seem fair to behold, it is the result of laborious use of
pigments, and if she is stripped of these many devices, she is like the
jackdaw that was plucked of its feathers in the fable.
âAchilles Tatius
Each night, she would stay in his sleep and in bed
morning would break early:he locked himself in the day,
no bathroom, only windows: a mirror, tubes, tweezers, bottles
the finger split gape and translucent sweets
rose lips of milk wash paint her a new skin
(Elizabeth) filling gouges, a weeping face with sores
thick-black lead whispers from lashes
or a jar of pupil and shelled eye-lids
for the wafer, rose lips rub away the gloss
a patch of flashâbetween tongue and teeth:
each night, sheâd stay in his sleep, in his head
smearing soot, stamen, cocoa on cotton cream;
his fingertips on skin faint as the trace of insect legs
or the first dawn-light on closed eyelids.
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Posted: July 10, 2006 4:11 AM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2006 4:11 AM PDT
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