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Waikiki (Free verse) by dana071287
The golden ball fell below the horizon,
creating a beautiful site to gaze on
To silhouettes the buildings turned,
the torches lit with fire burned.
Palm trees speckled the white shore,
making a paradise oneâs heart longs for.
Cool breezes cause the palm trees to wave
while surfers wait to catch one final wave.
Sounds of the hula fill the air,
and people relax without a care.
White powdery sand filled gaps between toes
leaves one left without any woes.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8884
Posted: May 11, 2006 9:41 PM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2006 9:41 PM PDT
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