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Or So They Say (Free verse) by avery
time awaiting,
the instant dissipating,
chances are fleeting
or so they say.
time passes,
the emotions rushes,
longing is not everlasting
or so they say.
time heals
these wounds are real
pain is fleeting
or so they say
time fades
memories of past dates
love is not everlasting
or so they say
but
my chances can come again
my longing still remains
my pain still grieves
my love still lives
time is neither fleeting nor everlasting
or so they say.
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Posted: December 5, 2004 9:23 AM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2004 9:23 AM PST
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