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Singularity (Free verse) by drnick
You Cut me and we watched it bleed Pretended like you didn't see Out pour insecurities Took a while though I was brief Look I can't have you climin' trees Looking down and laughing at me I cry inside and hardly breathe You're my lovely little allergy So What's it like to be the thief Take away my stars and dreams The center of my galaxy Just another of your abductees Sad Always have to have the lead I'd give you that and more for free Save you from the worst disease All I need is singularity

Up the ladder: Panthers
Down the ladder: Soul fruit

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8787
Posted: January 26, 2006 1:02 AM PST; Last modified: January 26, 2006 1:02 AM PST
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[8] zodiac @ 209.193.9.194 | 26-Jan-06/10:13 AM | Reply
Sorry, couldn't get into it.
[n/a] drnick @ 24.176.22.254 > zodiac | 26-Jan-06/1:24 PM | Reply
Shouldn't you have given me a lower score then?
[8] zodiac @ 209.193.9.194 > drnick | 26-Jan-06/1:56 PM | Reply
No, not really.
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