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A Loving Hand, Slightly Raised (Free verse) by Enkidu
Oh shy away
sunshine for your
own joy and
the well being
of this little
little boy
I think
you should not
like to know
why this
poor child's
screams should grow
Turn your head
and close
your eye and
come again
to comfort him
when he cries
Forever sunshine smile
to be a friend
when this small boy
shall look to
make an end
of all the
little tears he
must endure
within the bright
white sunshine
light and pure.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7960
Posted: May 1, 2006 1:17 PM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2006 1:17 PM PDT
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