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A Loving Hand, Slightly Raised (Free verse) by Enkidu

Oh shy away sunshine for your own joy and the well being of this little little boy I think you should not like to know why this poor child's screams should grow Turn your head and close your eye and come again to comfort him when he cries Forever sunshine smile to be a friend when this small boy shall look to make an end of all the little tears he must endure within the bright white sunshine light and pure.

Paul S 5-May-06/9:09 PM
Very good. the last 5 lines are excelent.




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