poemranker ::Kildare, 12-11-03 by myles

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Kildare, 12-11-03

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Oct 2004 · 0 comments

Father it's so great to tell you this, We both have flaws, though it's hard to admit. After all the hiding from everyone else, I've seen that weakness can't be hidden from you. I want to let you know this, That I've learned so much from you. Advice and conflict, successes and, Even inspirational mistakes. Dad, I've never lied to you for long, In the end I always wanted to be honest. So here I go, about to speak out, To tell you that I love you.

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