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Dying Rooms (Free verse) by longships
Awaken to the smell of soiled sheets
And unwashed bodies
Bedsores and infection are rife
Sanitation inadequate
Filthy clothes remain unchanged
Each day tied to a chair
At the ankles and waist
Supervision minimal
Hidden from outside view
Given little companionship
And no compassion
Barely enough food to survive
Tears form in eyes so young
An abandoned girl
Not long from the womb
Awaiting adoption that will never come
Orphaned
Love known only as discomfort
Love felt from the pain of abuse
Cries constantly ignored
Left to fend alone
Allowed to die in a filthy cot
In a squalid room
By a society
That calls itself civilised
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7793
Posted: May 1, 2006 10:58 AM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2006 10:58 AM PDT
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