If you want people to leave comments on your work, you have to give some first. Trust me.
Okay, grammar first - "Don't". Also, line 2 'aren't'. Line 3 - I assume you mean 'hearts'. Line 10 'lose' and 'It's'. Line 12 'straight'. As well as that, don't capitalise after commas (unless of course it's 'I' etc.) You might think this is unnecessary nitpicking, but believe me when I say that a well-written and grammatically correct piece is far more enjoyable to read. Even running a poem through the spellcheck on Word will pick up some errors.
Okay, on general points: this is a nice enough piece, pleasant enough - but it doesn't give a huge amount to the reader. It's difficult to write a consolatory poem that will affect the reader, particularly if the reader doesn't need consoling. That doesn't mean you shouldn't write like this, but keep practising until you can really elicit emotion. Most of the people here will be more than willing to give you advice on your writing - provided you reciprocate (even if it's just to say that you liked their poems).
My recommendation is that you practise imagery - descriptive writing, and finding original ways of describing certain things. It will open your imagination more, particularly when you start incorporating metaphor into your poems.
Keep going, good luck with your writing.

are u related to chemical engg/chemistry? i am..