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Goodbye (Free verse) by aamir_trichy

Dont cry, Dont shed tears, Arent they precious? Dont break heart, Dont be pained, Let the pain be mine. Dont worry, Dont be afraid, I will be fine. Dont remember me, Dont be burdened with past,Be strong for the times to come. Dont stop dreaming, Dont loose the thought, Its where you should rejoice. Dont Run from you, Dont Turn back, Face the mirror and see that you stand straiht. Dont know where I will be, Dont know the road, Its a long way I need to go. Dont weaken me, Dont be hurt, Your happiness will carry me along.

aamir_trichy 25-Feb-06/7:35 PM
thankyou...for going through and picking out mistakes..the next piece will be better....




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