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Eden to Galillee (by Caducus) (Free verse) by Mona Lisa
Galilee eyed, you walked upon my grief broke my bread and divided my treasures to robed blurs. Love is the apple of Genesis. Man is but a feast of ribs, a table of bitter meat a womb orphan best devoured whole before he worships woman and tastes the cunt of love. Galilee eyed, I sank to my depths laid as an arc of ribs where two by two men fall like sycamore on wood; leaving scarlet threads from your scarlet nails.

Down the ladder: Yesterdays testament

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6443
Posted: February 21, 2006 7:12 AM PST; Last modified: February 21, 2006 7:12 AM PST
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[n/a] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 21-Feb-06/7:42 AM | Reply
You haven't really pinched this from Caducus have you?
He's written far too much for me to check.
[9] zodiac @ 66.230.117.4 | 21-Feb-06/3:20 PM | Reply
Looks like Caducus to me.
[n/a] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 > zodiac | 21-Feb-06/3:45 PM | Reply
Okay, so I missed 'the cunt of love' earlier (seems I missed a lot earlier, bah). That doesn't sound like Caducus to me.
[8] smoofle @ 88.106.175.245 | 24-Feb-06/10:46 AM | Reply
I rather like it, cunt and all...
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