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Eden to Galillee (by Caducus) (Free verse) by Mona Lisa
Galilee eyed,
you walked upon my grief
broke my bread
and divided my treasures
to robed blurs.
Love is the apple of Genesis.
Man is but a feast of ribs,
a table of bitter meat
a womb orphan
best devoured whole
before he worships woman
and tastes the cunt of love.
Galilee eyed,
I sank to my depths
laid as an arc of ribs
where two by two
men fall like sycamore on wood;
leaving scarlet threads
from your scarlet nails.
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Posted: February 21, 2006 7:12 AM PST; Last modified: February 21, 2006 7:12 AM PST
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He's written far too much for me to check.