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Eden to Galillee (by Caducus)

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Feb 2006 · 4 comments

Galilee eyed, you walked upon my grief broke my bread and divided my treasures to robed blurs. Love is the apple of Genesis. Man is but a feast of ribs, a table of bitter meat a womb orphan best devoured whole before he worships woman and tastes the cunt of love. Galilee eyed, I sank to my depths laid as an arc of ribs where two by two men fall like sycamore on wood; leaving scarlet threads from your scarlet nails.

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[n/a] Ranger 21-Feb-06/7:42 AM Reply
You haven't really pinched this from Caducus have you?
He's written far too much for me to check.
[9] zodiac 21-Feb-06/3:20 PM Reply
Looks like Caducus to me.
[n/a] Ranger › zodiac 21-Feb-06/3:45 PM Reply
Okay, so I missed 'the cunt of love' earlier (seems I missed a lot earlier, bah). That doesn't sound like Caducus to me.
[8] smoofle 24-Feb-06/10:46 AM Reply
I rather like it, cunt and all...