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Ode to Seduction (Ode) by MacFrantic Thou,
Brandy-skinned harlot,
Who scarce beg her fare.
'Tis wicked of you
And noxious to rook
Men as you do.
Coddling their serpents
To assure that pestilence
Is forever tamed.
What are you such that
Wiles thus deceive them?
Some bawdy queen for sure.
What for this spleen
Of mind and soul?
You are the regaling trick,
The poison-toothed bitch.
A dagger received
In the cold raptures of night.
Up the ladder:
Caveat
Down the ladder:
The Perception's Play
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Posted: February 1, 2006 11:15 AM PST; Last modified: February 1, 2006 11:15 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7988 Comments:
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LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.135
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2-Feb-06/8:20 AM
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I'll let someone else corerect your punctuation...it need work...but this is cool.
correct...even.
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