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Ode to the Bun

Member since 2004 · Posted 13 Jul 2004 · Edited 13 Jul 2004 · 2 comments

There once was a bun of raisins and icing, that at one stage in life was probably enticing. But Mike failed its mandate, to be eaten by due by date. And now it sits on his desk Demise(ing).

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[n/a] horus8 14-Jul-04/12:29 PM Reply
fat arse
[8] richa 14-Jul-04/1:32 PM Reply
Pleasant enough sounds.