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Ode to the Bun (Ode) by JaneDC
There once was a bun of raisins and icing, that at one stage in life was probably enticing. But Mike failed its mandate, to be eaten by due by date. And now it sits on his desk Demise(ing).

Up the ladder: Biters
Down the ladder: Reasonably Good

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7940
Posted: July 13, 2004 9:27 PM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2004 9:38 PM PDT
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 14-Jul-04/12:29 PM | Reply
fat arse
[8] richa @ 81.178.242.35 | 14-Jul-04/1:32 PM | Reply
Pleasant enough sounds.
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