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Giving in to a boring suggestion (Free verse) by Joe-joe
A highly enthused awl
is presently making its way to China
just outside my 10 X 10 holding pen
where paper clips, loose change, and an
empty soup container quiver like
a martyr with badly timed second thoughts.
Pens and pencils give into the fray
While a wayward phone and staple remover
stubbornly bore off temptation
and I, less inclined to resist,
il o h ae f y rmln rtes
Yed t te ft o m tebig bohr.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5442
Posted: January 31, 2006 6:37 AM PST; Last modified: January 31, 2006 6:41 AM PST
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