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Giving in to a boring suggestion (Free verse) by Joe-joe

A highly enthused awl is presently making its way to China just outside my 10 X 10 holding pen where paper clips, loose change, and an empty soup container quiver like a martyr with badly timed second thoughts. Pens and pencils give into the fray While a wayward phone and staple remover stubbornly bore off temptation and I, less inclined to resist, il o h ae f y rmln rtes Yed t te ft o m tebig bohr.

Ranger 31-Jan-06/8:12 AM
Very readable...'a martyr with badly timed second thoughts' made me laugh out loud, for that this is worth a 9...very creative indeed!




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