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After Rain (Sonnet) by Niphredil
They came before the sundown, a gentle multitude,
Through rain-swept ground, without a sound, they mildly passed by
The time had finally come, they knew, when each among them should
Forgo their darkened shelter; venture out beneath the sky.
All they sought was sustenance and each one moved in peace
A world apart; to each its heart, to each its beating breath.
Not a moment did they falter; not an instant did they cease
The first one never saw the wind that heralded his death.
It started on the puddled ground, beneath the setting sun
A holocaust of car exhaust as brutal boots crashed down
And all the broken figures of all those too slow to run
Smashed into a frieze of suffering; convoluted on the ground.
And everywhere the eye beheld a multitude of slain,
On every road and sidewalk strewn with snails after rain.
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Posted: January 26, 2006 9:26 AM PST; Last modified: January 26, 2006 9:26 AM PST
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