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Upon Reading "Siddartha" (Free verse) by frahj
Lifting past my sallow reflection, Flows the memories of my consciousness. I see not the realities of my past, Or the illusions of my future. It seems as if I was, But am no longer. Seize my heart! Grasp my soul! And extinguish them in your bosom- Time. Lip-synching, You putrid mouth Of pouting, dripping red. Scream your beautiful profanities At my cowering soul. Until I burst into a thousand colors And fade back, Into the dark gray of reality- Time.

Up the ladder: Remus
Down the ladder: dr. bowmp bowmp

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8768
Posted: January 25, 2006 4:11 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2006 4:11 PM PST
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[n/a] god'swife @ 71.103.98.44 | 25-Jan-06/10:19 PM | Reply
It's very difficult to take this seriously.
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