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Witch's Brew (Free verse) by ecargo
Witches' thimble spiked to quake the heart, glossy, noxious clumps of fool’s parsley, house leek to turn lightning and ill luck: These let my borders be. No lilac wrung for love; wrench rosemary from the ground. Let nightshade choke the roses warded by thicket and thorn. I’ll prowl the edges, tethered, a morning glory stranglehold twining and binding the florid border, hoarding my anger, bitter as hemlock, black as a drowning pool, twisted crabapple crone, brewing and stirring my rage all alone.

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.545455
Weighted score: 6.7727275
Overall Rank: 440
Posted: January 10, 2006 10:28 AM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2006 3:23 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] zodiac @ 209.193.18.119 | 10-Jan-06/7:09 PM | Reply
This got better. First stanza needs a rewrite.
[9] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 20-Feb-06/8:10 AM | Reply
Man I love this.
[9] Ulterius @ 82.46.97.41 | 31-Aug-06/7:50 AM | Reply
73 views and only two comments. It's an outrage. By the way, I totally disagree about the first stanza. I think it's brilliant.
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