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Free verse № 136716

Witch's Brew

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jan 2006 · Edited 10 Jan 2006 · 3 comments

Witches' thimble spiked to quake the heart, glossy, noxious clumps of fool’s parsley, house leek to turn lightning and ill luck: These let my borders be. No lilac wrung for love; wrench rosemary from the ground. Let nightshade choke the roses warded by thicket and thorn. I’ll prowl the edges, tethered, a morning glory stranglehold twining and binding the florid border, hoarding my anger, bitter as hemlock, black as a drowning pool, twisted crabapple crone, brewing and stirring my rage all alone.

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A favorite of Ranger.

3 comments

[8] zodiac 10-Jan-06/7:09 PM Reply
This got better. First stanza needs a rewrite.
[9] Ranger 20-Feb-06/8:10 AM Reply
Man I love this.
[9] Ulterius 31-Aug-06/7:50 AM Reply
73 views and only two comments. It's an outrage. By the way, I totally disagree about the first stanza. I think it's brilliant.