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Half Hearted (Free verse) by elderking
Taking half hearted chances
at loving once more.
With half tried romances,
I'm left wanting more.
Your arm length embraces,
I'm allowed just so close.
A loving heart races,
while ours reach "almost".
These pleasures, half tasted,
amount to not much.
Our kisses are wasted,
Our hearts are untouched.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5439
Posted: January 2, 2006 6:31 PM PST; Last modified: January 2, 2006 6:31 PM PST
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