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order of events (Free verse) by skaskowski on her way to the liquor store:
1) she stepped over a dead rat next to a dumpster.
2) She dropped some pebbles down a sewage grate.
3) She found someone's overdue library book on the ground.
4) She saw 3 used needles.
5) She picked up 23 cents in small change.
6) She caught her backpack on a wire fence and ripped it.
7) She went to a liquor store.
8) She went home.
Up the ladder:
Dress rehearsal
Down the ladder:
I hate Haiku's. Bombs away.
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Posted: December 28, 2005 12:24 AM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2005 12:24 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10544 Comments:
Are you Amelie Poulain?
no, but that's what we named our cat.
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the power of your words. Need a capital S in first line. Repetitive she lends it a rhythm.