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order of events (Free verse) by skaskowski

on her way to the liquor store: 1) she stepped over a dead rat next to a dumpster. 2) She dropped some pebbles down a sewage grate. 3) She found someone's overdue library book on the ground. 4) She saw 3 used needles. 5) She picked up 23 cents in small change. 6) She caught her backpack on a wire fence and ripped it. 7) She went to a liquor store. 8) She went home.

zodiac 30-Dec-05/7:11 AM
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