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amalgam (Free verse) by ThePariahDog breathing cleaner
you're downstairs
spoken tongues
poisoning the air
compound fracture
flashing white enamel
juxtaposed to marrow
stressing the facts
we ate the truth
choking on an apple
i heave my ribs
though i'm missing a piece
from within
despite my injury
i'll go on playing the bones
Up the ladder:
Go
Down the ladder:
Satellite
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Posted: December 26, 2005 8:55 PM PST; Last modified: December 26, 2005 8:55 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9249 Comments:
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zodiac @ 70.109.2.131
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27-Dec-05/9:19 PM
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My best suggestion is that you start reading real poetry. Here's a good place to start: http://www.poems.com/archive.htm
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