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amalgam (Free verse) by ThePariahDog

breathing cleaner you're downstairs spoken tongues poisoning the air compound fracture flashing white enamel juxtaposed to marrow stressing the facts we ate the truth choking on an apple i heave my ribs though i'm missing a piece from within despite my injury i'll go on playing the bones

zodiac 27-Dec-05/9:19 PM
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