poemranker ::O dear. by celticskatermatt1

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Free verse № 134037

O dear.

by celticskatermatt1

Member since 2004 · Posted 23 Nov 2005 · 4 comments

O dear. i think i lost it my mind is going to have a fit im in love. o dear. i think i found it. the right person in my life im in love. o dear. i know it. its true, i can feel it. im in love. o dear. i hope it. i hope you know that i love u because im in love.

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4 comments

[5] cyan9 24-Nov-05/1:54 AM Reply
O Dear, not another one. When will these people realise.... I felt compelled to give this a low vote, firstly on the basis that it lulled me towards the position of wanting to vomit, but not enougth so as to stick two fingers down my throat. Secondly it uses the word love a hell of a lot, without saying anything about your feelings or this other person, and so feels somewhat less than loving and more like a manic fad; whether that is the intention or not.
[9] Dovina 24-Nov-05/11:52 AM Reply
It's the way of emotion, and emotion gets it's way. After "Due Consideration" (see my poem by that title) we decide by the seat of our pants or by what feels right. You've said it well.
[5] zodiac 25-Nov-05/1:31 AM Reply
I predict you're not going to care what we say about this poem. Good for you. You'll show us.
[n/a] celticskatermatt1 › zodiac 30-Dec-05/7:58 PM Reply
good guess