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O dear. (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

O dear. i think i lost it my mind is going to have a fit im in love. o dear. i think i found it. the right person in my life im in love. o dear. i know it. its true, i can feel it. im in love. o dear. i hope it. i hope you know that i love u because im in love.

cyan9 24-Nov-05/1:54 AM
O Dear, not another one. When will these people realise.... I felt compelled to give this a low vote, firstly on the basis that it lulled me towards the position of wanting to vomit, but not enougth so as to stick two fingers down my throat. Secondly it uses the word love a hell of a lot, without saying anything about your feelings or this other person, and so feels somewhat less than loving and more like a manic fad; whether that is the intention or not.




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