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jamaica (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
ship sails and entrails; i'm stripped to the heart. where my bum touched a foreign toilet. such a demeaning action is just as sorely missed as a romp through the beaches of sandals beached in singles. and coral so sharp you have to wear shoes to swim. i miss you, mother ocean. you abducted me, but i submarined back.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9498
Posted: November 23, 2005 3:56 AM PST; Last modified: November 23, 2005 3:56 AM PST
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