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jamaica

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Nov 2005 · 0 comments

ship sails and entrails; i'm stripped to the heart. where my bum touched a foreign toilet. such a demeaning action is just as sorely missed as a romp through the beaches of sandals beached in singles. and coral so sharp you have to wear shoes to swim. i miss you, mother ocean. you abducted me, but i submarined back.

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