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Adrian isn't just a girl from 'Rocky' (Haiku) by D. $ Fontera She was tall and sweet
And her teeth clicked when she laughed
And she died in June
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Posted: September 13, 2005 8:55 PM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2006 11:18 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9205313 Overall Rank: 9496 Comments:
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1-May-06/2:34 AM
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If you replaced the "ands" in lines two and three with something more concrete this would be better. A good effort though.
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