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Random Sandwich, or, The Scavenger's Chocolate Wrapper (Free verse) by impert&ent
As the last strains of comment gilds the woodland floor weary again endless survival purple twilight Farewell me bonny lass Opened the window just wide enough to see head and pillow meet like film through a lateral trap gasp with greed, chop off my spaghetti Ten weeks old Sucking on your thumb Hey bellwether,

Down the ladder: Pathological

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4822
Posted: November 20, 2005 9:09 AM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2005 9:09 AM PST
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[n/a] impert&ent @ 82.46.140.179 | 20-Nov-05/9:17 AM | Reply
A collage of snippets from the first lines of the last 13 poems to appear on Poemranker's RSS feed. Neither random nor contrived, this pick of the litter/litter-picker's approach to composition reflects the momentary ambience of poemranker.
[6] Dovina @ 209.247.222.98 > impert&ent | 20-Nov-05/4:32 PM | Reply
You didn't use mine. I should give a zero.
[n/a] impert&ent @ 82.46.140.179 > Dovina | 21-Nov-05/3:54 AM | Reply
How true. But it wasn't in the list of thirteen that showed up in my RSS reader. Maybe I should make up for it by having a collage poem of zeroes.
[10] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 > impert&ent | 21-Nov-05/9:21 AM | Reply
I got two. -10-
[10] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > zodiac | 21-Nov-05/11:58 AM | Reply
I got 1 but it's in both stanzas. +10+
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