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Random Sandwich, or, The Scavenger's Chocolate Wrapper (Free verse) by impert&ent As the last strains of comment
gilds the woodland floor
weary again
endless survival
purple twilight
Farewell
me bonny lass
Opened the window just wide enough to see
head and pillow meet
like film through a lateral trap
gasp with greed,
chop off my spaghetti
Ten weeks old
Sucking on your thumb
Hey bellwether,
Up the ladder:
C a n u t e
Down the ladder:
missing
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Posted: November 20, 2005 9:09 AM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2005 9:09 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.1788044 Overall Rank: 4905 Comments:
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impert&ent @ 82.46.140.179
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20-Nov-05/9:17 AM
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A collage of snippets from the first lines of the last 13 poems to appear on Poemranker's RSS feed. Neither random nor contrived, this pick of the litter/litter-picker's approach to composition reflects the momentary ambience of poemranker.
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Dovina @ 209.247.222.98
> impert&ent
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20-Nov-05/4:32 PM
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You didn't use mine. I should give a zero.
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impert&ent @ 82.46.140.179
> Dovina
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21-Nov-05/3:54 AM
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How true. But it wasn't in the list of thirteen that showed up in my RSS reader. Maybe I should make up for it by having a collage poem of zeroes.
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zodiac @ 217.144.7.195
> impert&ent
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21-Nov-05/9:21 AM
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I got two. -10-
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
> zodiac
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21-Nov-05/11:58 AM
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I got 1 but it's in both stanzas. +10+
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