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Random Sandwich, or, The Scavenger's Chocolate Wrapper

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Nov 2005 · 5 comments

As the last strains of comment gilds the woodland floor weary again endless survival purple twilight Farewell me bonny lass Opened the window just wide enough to see head and pillow meet like film through a lateral trap gasp with greed, chop off my spaghetti Ten weeks old Sucking on your thumb Hey bellwether,

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[n/a] impert&ent 20-Nov-05/9:17 AM Reply

A collage of snippets from the first lines of the last 13 poems to appear on Poemranker's RSS feed. Neither random nor contrived, this pick of the litter/litter-picker's approach to composition reflects the momentary ambience of poemranker.

[6] Dovina › impert&ent 20-Nov-05/4:32 PM Reply

You didn't use mine. I should give a zero.

[n/a] impert&ent › Dovina 21-Nov-05/3:54 AM Reply

How true. But it wasn't in the list of thirteen that showed up in my RSS reader. Maybe I should make up for it by having a collage poem of zeroes.

[10] zodiac › impert&ent 21-Nov-05/9:21 AM Reply

I got two. -10-

[10] ALChemy › zodiac 21-Nov-05/11:58 AM Reply

I got 1 but it's in both stanzas. +10+