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Random Sandwich, or, The Scavenger's Chocolate Wrapper (Free verse) by impert&ent

As the last strains of comment gilds the woodland floor weary again endless survival purple twilight Farewell me bonny lass Opened the window just wide enough to see head and pillow meet like film through a lateral trap gasp with greed, chop off my spaghetti Ten weeks old Sucking on your thumb Hey bellwether,

ALChemy 21-Nov-05/11:58 AM
I got 1 but it's in both stanzas. +10+




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