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dont bite my candy neck (Free verse) by New Life Drug
What's the use
Of feeling substancial
When no one cares?
I'm being used
I go into a stormy exodus
I walk past words
The ones that flow from their teeth
I like to call them lies
but then I realize
that is how they breathe
Nothing is sacred, nothing meaningful
I might as well be inebriated
for the rest of my life
Sinking to their level
Makes me want to
Stab a tiki torch through my chest
It's the best I could come up with
On such short notice
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4910
Posted: September 30, 2004 10:05 PM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2004 10:05 PM PDT
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