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dont bite my candy neck (Free verse) by New Life Drug
What's the use Of feeling substancial When no one cares? I'm being used I go into a stormy exodus I walk past words The ones that flow from their teeth I like to call them lies but then I realize that is how they breathe Nothing is sacred, nothing meaningful I might as well be inebriated for the rest of my life Sinking to their level Makes me want to Stab a tiki torch through my chest It's the best I could come up with On such short notice

Up the ladder: untitled
Down the ladder: Never Answer...

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4910
Posted: September 30, 2004 10:05 PM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2004 10:05 PM PDT
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