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Seasonal Love (Cinquain) by Bhaskaryya
Youthful as soggy spring you end my life’s dry spell and let fresh passions blossom in my heart Sizzling as summer sun you melt away my past and lead me to the exotic eden Naked as bare autumn you wrap me in your arms and whisper the promise of a new start Frozen as winter frost my body finds shelter underneath the warm blanket of your love

Up the ladder: without you
Down the ladder: a lie

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3317
Posted: November 12, 2005 5:19 AM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2005 5:19 AM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 14-Nov-05/5:22 PM | Reply
Nice, to put on his pillow at each season's beginning.
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