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subjective relationship (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
coal through the bottles
with the bottoms broken off,
coca-cola caramelized
and bubbling brown between the rocks.
where she smashed her beverage down
after a single belchless belt,
and gulped a boullion-cubic rubix cubit
of air into her belly.
climbing through the remnants of her
coal mine field
where the burning bushes barf out broken
tablets...
partially digested with the script a bit smudged,
"thou shalt not... 500 mg."
that's all i can make out.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9206
Posted: November 11, 2005 11:47 PM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2005 11:47 PM PST
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