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subjective relationship (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
coal through the bottles with the bottoms broken off, coca-cola caramelized and bubbling brown between the rocks. where she smashed her beverage down after a single belchless belt, and gulped a boullion-cubic rubix cubit of air into her belly. climbing through the remnants of her coal mine field where the burning bushes barf out broken tablets... partially digested with the script a bit smudged, "thou shalt not... 500 mg." that's all i can make out.

Up the ladder: Castle of Pandas III
Down the ladder: My Prince

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9206
Posted: November 11, 2005 11:47 PM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2005 11:47 PM PST
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