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Divorce (Haiku) by timvick473662003
Both Start seperatly Together you become one She takes all your stuff
Up the ladder: featherlight hands
Down the ladder: Lazy Pindaric Ode Blues
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9291
Posted: April 15, 2007 1:36 PM PDT; Last modified: April 15, 2007 1:36 PM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 75.82.86.162 | 16-Apr-07/6:56 PM | Reply
Wouldn't it mean the same if you shortened it:

Start separately
Become one
She takes all your stuff

But then it wouldn't be 5-7-5. Pity.
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